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We caught butterflies in our eyelashes that night
Long woven traps of fraud intricacies
They were so beautiful
The way the sweat,
the heat of the night glistened off their lightly dusted wings.

The skies played symphonies in our heads
The constellations we traced in the grass
The blank slates lying in our fingertips waiting to be drawn
Maps lying up and down our legs

We sailed in the red waters, tasting the murky fog
weaving through our hair
between interlocked fingers
through the tear ducts of our eyes
came the sharp taste on the tip of your tongue.

I liked the way you looked at me
As if the dry sands spraying in my throat could cease
The skies would whisper sweet reminders
that there is no such thing as tomorrow

And the look in your eyes would say it all.
The dancing light reflecting the ignited air between us,
The desire,
The butterfly traps in our eyelashes
The maps of our skin
The currents of our breath
The curiosity of our eyes
The way the grass rolled over us that night and the air smelled so sweet
The prickling beads beneath our nails reaching up
wanting to learn
wanting to hold
wanting to learn to hold

Golden dusted snakes threatened our sanctuary
Turned this estranged love
We rolled into the earth that night
Our dirt smeared faces
The melodic notes you sang as laughter sailed from your lips
The off key waft through linoleum covered walls
Crippling plastered glares on the walls of our safe house
Lined fingerprints with blood
Traced in a line up and down

We caught butterflies in our eyelashes that night
A disastrous harmony
And our eyes were drawn to the skies
whispered it's crooked replies
We set them free
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i love it! perfectly made..
can't help but admire....

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free your mind. :reading:
think deviously. :devart: mrchatterboxgarvey-

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This is so beautifully written!!!
The first line and repetition is great.

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"When they attack, you fight with your sword. When they break your sword, you flight with your hands. When they break your hands, you fight with your heart." ~Besheit from The Datura
nicceee.
those last five lines are especially killer.

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Rotonamama.
i enjoy your use of the circle effect .. sying it and bringing it back around in the end
nevermind your vocabulary and descriptions .. it makes me happy to know you'll bearound in spun once me and meg leave ... and also makes me happy that you're in spun in general.

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CREEPSHOW yO!!! :zombie:
this is my favorite of yours. love the last few lines
i hate you. you're too good at this.
and i need to stop favoriting all of your poems. but i can't help myself. :grumbles:

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